Sunday, July 23, 2006

Leave Me Here Alone In My Room, Feeling Genius, Feeling Blue, and I'll Finger Pick and I'll Watch the Rain...

Well, song number 3 is in the bag. I JUST finished it. It's from the perspective of a guy waiting for his wife or girlfriend or just a friend to die (you'll get it once you read the lyrics).


"Some People Think of Heaven As a Garden of Eden...But What is Scenery Without Solace?"


Moving too fast on a long and winding road
Missed the curve, spiraled out of control
A flash, a crash, it's all over so soon...


Here is a place where we can hide
Free from the worries seeping through the other side
Tell all your friends, start spreading the news
Tears may fall, but they won't last long...
I'll see you soon...


Laying in your bed, tossing and turning...
You want to cry, but can only choke instead
I'm sorry that I'm gone
It's all my fault
Please don't forget me...I will remember you


Here is a place where we can hide
Free from the worries seeping through the other side
Tell all your friends, start spreading the news
Tears may fall, but they won't last long...
I'll see you soon...

The day has finally come
I will see you so soon
Taken in your sleep my dear
So here again we meet
...But all I'm getting is a blank stare
You've forgotten me.


Here is a place where we both can hide
Free from the worries seeping through the other side
Tell all your friends, start spreading the news
Tears may fall, but they won't last long...
I still love you





Kinda meh, but oh well. What do you expect out of me at 4AM? I still need a title for it, though. Maybe "Thoughts From Heaven?" I dunno. That sounds lame.

4 Comments:

Blogger Stephanie said...

That's a pretty neat song, and deep.

4:12 PM  
Blogger Stephanie said...

He could easily stay with my friend Carly but he said he didn't want to stay with anybody because than he would feel ever worse. I don't know why that is. Not having sleeping in my car would make me feel better...
Who knows though.

11:45 AM  
Blogger Stephanie said...

I just listened to the song for a second time and it is truly amazing, everything ties together very well. The guitar part sounds like two, because of the simutaneous picking and strumming. And the lyrics are great, it would be neat if a girl like the kitefighting girl sung half of them, and the vocals were being sung to the other person, back and forth. But yah, that wont happen but it's still a neat idea.

12:55 PM  
Blogger Stephanie said...

Maybe Jessica Jones? Or I dunno, that's the only person I hear that sings. If milly had a tadbit older voice, i would say she's the one.

I don't think the song is missing anything, it's good as is

10:20 AM  

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